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X-Men: End Times Sample Canon Application

In addition to the Sample OC App, we’ve provided the app of one of our Canon characters, generously provided by the first player of Jean Grey. This helps illustrate both what makes a good app, and good ways to alter a canon version in new and interesting ways. Again, the personal information is removed, and the app was good enough to approve on the first try.

Before reading the app itself, keep in mind some of the good things that are in it. Aside from those things mentioned in the OC sample app, with a canon character, one of the keys is showing knowledge of the original character in being able to twist it to a new and different version. The character is both recognizeably Jean Grey, and yet a DIFFERENT Jean Grey.


At any rate, without furthur ado, the app...
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5.  Name: Dr. Jean Grey, aka Red, aka Jeanie

6.  Description: Tall, leggy, with a physique that would seem to be a natural for any runway, this young woman has the looks for a high-profile career as a supermodel, but she doesn’t carry herself in that manner.  Her deep emerald eyes carry a weight of pain in them, far outweighing her other positive attributes.  There are already minute age lines around eyes and lips, and they are not hidden by any sort of make-up.  Her lips are full, yet they do not appear luscious or inviting.  There is almost always a world-weary down-turning of the corners of her mouth, shattering any illusion of beauty.  Creamy skin is slightly blemished, or maybe it’s simply that she doesn’t bother to use make-up to hide the sun-freckles on her nose and cheeks.  She has the natural red hair of the Irish folk, waving gently, but she wears it cut short.  Whether this was for a ‘look’ or simply because she doesn’t want to have to deal with long curly hair, that is anyone’s guess.  Her attire masks her body’s curves.  Instead of a sharp business suit or a body-hugging spandex number, she has chosen a pair of conservative dark green slacks with matching pumps, and a large and shapeless cardigan tossed carelessly around her torso.  She hunches within the large cardigan as if hiding from something, or maybe simply hiding from the entire world.

7.  Psyche

Scully - For everything in the world, there is a rational, scientific explanation.  Even if we don’t know what that is yet.  Jean Grey is firmly of this belief.  The only exception to her Scully tendencies is those relating to God (see Christian).  Otherwise, Jean will happily go out of her way to debunk any mad theories of magic, mutants, and random mysticism.  She doesn’t believe in the occult, nor in mutants, nor in the Loch Ness monster and the theory of Atlantis.  All of that stuff, to her, is fantasy, much in the way of Santa Claus and the Easter Bunny.  It merely requires more research, more data, and eventually a truthful, rational, scientific explanation will arise.

Delusional - Jean Grey is a delusional young woman.  She has been told since she was a child that boogeymen didn’t exist, that the voices in her head were simply her imagination.  In the face of parental and doctoral rationalizations for what was happening to her, it is no wonder she developed a very keen sense that anything weird happening isn’t truly happening, or that it’s not happening the way she may think it’s happening.  In the face of facts that would shatter her worldview, she will seek a more rational explanation and dismiss any theories that don’t fit what she believes is The Truth (tm).

Denial - Denial isn’t just a river in Egypt.  Jean Grey is in such vast denial about so many things, it’s a wonder she doesn’t explode.  She denies her own mutant powers, claiming they are merely voices in her head, that she’s mad.  She denies the existence of mutants, for that, she claims, is just plain silly.  She denies magic, mythos, and the occult, claiming that they are merely artifacts of infernal slavery and attempts by Satan to conquer the world.  She denies the real truth, because the idea that her life is a lie scares her enough to rail against it.  Her favorite word is no.
Introvert - Jean Grey is a repressed young woman.  She is not comfortable with herself, and she is not comfortable with other people around her. It is even difficult for her to be around friends and family she’s known for years, much less strangers.  She is very conservative in her viewpoints, and she does not willingly seek out human contact.  In short, she’s a prude.

Fear - The world is swiftly becoming larger than she can imagine.  Things are happening that she is harder and harder pressed to denounce.  Jean Grey lives in fear of the madness, of allowing human contact, of finding out once and for all that she is inescapably /wrong/ about the world around her.  Fear preys on her every thought, on her every movement, on her very soul.  She has to force herself to show no fear, but it is a very exhaustive and difficult struggle.

Tempermental - When provoked, or faced with the easily-debunkable, Jean Grey can show a flash of that celtic temper that redheads are famous for. She is capable of a righteous anger, and the phrase ‘hell hath no fury’ was written just for her.  When enraged, her eyes seem to flash, and her beautiful face takes on a terrible aspect.

Sarcastic Wit - When provoked, Jean is capable of lashing out with her tongue.  While not as witty as a Victorian professional wit, she can be quite scathing in her responses to various stimuli.  She has disdain for the spandex-types and their fancy-schmantzy codenames and feels quite free to insult or otherwise belittle them.  She can get quite colorful in her insults, yet she doesn’t use much by the way of profanity.

Shattered - Jean Grey is a shattered young woman.  Destroyed at the age of 10, she has slowly been trying to reclaim her life from the demons which torment her.  She laments her stolen childhood and rails against those who would steal the adult life she’s carved for herself.  Her psyche was shattered when Annie Richardon died.  Because she did not receive proper treatment for the voices in her head, that shattering has only been lumped together, held together with bubble gum.

Poor Self-Esteem - Jean Grey has a poor self-image.  She may look great, but she doesn’t wear make-up, she doesn’t feel proud of herself, and she is very uncomfortable with herself and her body.  She makes efforts to conceal herself from view, whether it be by wearing loose clothing to wearing glasses that make her look like a bookworm.  Unconsciously, she slumps as she walks or sits, a slouch that may become a health issue in the future, since slouching is not good for one’s back. Strong Will - Despite how fragile Jean Grey’s psyche is, she holds an indomitable will when it comes to things she believes, even in the face of ‘evidence’ to the contrary.  This will is about the only thing holding her together right now.  It fuels her faith and is what helps keep her faith from faltering.

Christian - Jean Grey is a mainstream Christian.  She believes in the Protestant faith that is the norm for much of America.  She is not a demonstrative sort of Christian, activist and annoying others by asking them to convert.  She is the quiet sort, the one who latches on to her faith as a lifeline.  Her belief in God and Jesus and the Bible’s teachings pervade her life, but are not flagrant so as to be offensive to others.

Brittle - Despite her faith in God, despite her faith in science and rationality, Jean has a tenuous grasp on her mental stability.  Any attacks upon her worldview, if not met with denial and rationalizations, will swiftly corrode her sanity until she is once more that which she fears the most: insane.  Her mental stability is extremely fragile, and it is merely being held by her strong force of will and by her faith.  If she loses one or both of them, she will fall into the madness once more.

8.   Physical

Hot babe - While she would deny it to her death, Jean Grey does have the looks to be a major player on the supermodel scene.  She could put on a swimsuit and have every male (and a number of female) tongue on the ground with major drooling on their part.  She certainly looks like she works out, yet she doesn’t appear to even notice it or appreciate how her looks affect others.

9.   Skills

Lecturing - Being an associate professor at Bard College, Jean Grey is skilled in lecturing.  While not being horribly flamboyant, she is able to use her knowledge of medicine and sociology to speak reputably and seemingly knowledgeably about those two fields.  She is not yet experienced enough in either field to be able to go without lecture notes and speak directly from memory, however.

Scholarship - Scholarship is the ability to act and behave like a scholar.  This includes a certain air of knowledge cultivated around a person, an appropriate dress code, and being able to mix and mingle with other repressed academics.  It also means the ability to actually go to school for the purpose of studying and not partying.  This is Jean.  She can study, she can talk to her fellow academics, and she can act knowledgeable.

Medicine - The lesser of Jean’s two scholastic pursuits, medicine and medical science were enough to garner her pre-med status while in school. She left of study of medical matters upon reaching her masters, so as to focus more on sociology.  She has medical knowledge of human tissues and such up to the level of an EMT or med student, but is not a licensed physician or geneticist like that harridan MacTaggert. :)

Sociology - Odd that a wall flower would choose sociology as something to study.  Not full psychology, as that’s a little bit too close to home for her comfort, but sociology, which is the study of society and trends and how people behave in groups.  It involves a good deal of psychology, but is geared more toward the big picture of humanity as a whole, rather than delving into a single psyche to analyze.  As this is what Jean has her doctorate in, she is fully versed in all the lingo, all the latest theories and breakthroughs, and can quote a number of sociological professionals at the drop of a hat.

Research - Living in a library is something Jean could happily do for the rest of her life.  She loves books, she is well-versed in reading them, picking out good information, and also using alternative resources for information, such as the internet, microfilm, etc.  She is almost a borderline forensic specialist in this regard, except her strength is digging through a paper trail, not entrails. :)

10.   Powers

None - Jean Grey firmly believes she has no powers.  She rarely exhibits anything that resembles a mutant power.  Even if she did, she would either claim it was the wind or an hallucination.

Potentials - Please check out the potentials section for what powers she truly has and may someday actualize.

11.   Magic
None

12.  Tech
None beyond what a regular collegiate professor could acquire on her salary.

13.     Resources

Bard College - Jean Grey is an associate professor at Bard College.  This means she has been hired to teach various classes, generally first-level sorts of classes, given her own youth and recent acquisition of her doctorate.  She is not tenured and thus could be fired at any time for any reason by the college.  So, she makes a point of not angering her benefactor.  She has a small office, as befits her status, with a large bookcase, a desk, a chair for a visitor, and a computer.  That’s about it.  She has faculty privileges at the college, the same as many other member of the staff there, yet isn’t inducted into the privileges that more senior members of faculty get, such as her father.  Bard College pays her a modest salary, as befitting her status as a new professor.  It is enough to live on.  It doesn’t allow a lavish lifestyle, but she fares better than her students.

John, Elaine, Sarah Grey - Jean Grey’s family are always nearby, there for her.  John, her father, is a tenured professor at Bard College and unabashedly greased the wheels for her own employment there.  Her mother Elaine is a professional housewife.  Sarah Grey is Jean’s older sister. She’s some kind of activist or other, always out there enjoying life, trying to get Jean to join her in having fun.  Sarah is married and doesn’t live in the area, but she has a daughter and son, Joey and Gailyn, whom Jean adores.  Jean’s family kept her going during the dark time after Annie Richardson’s death, and she can always depend on them for anything.

14.     Background

Jean Grey was born to John and Elaine Grey in Annandale-on-Hudson.  She was born into a comfortable middle-class white-bread family, with an older sister named Sarah.  Her days were full of bliss and joy as her sheltered life kept her from more than a few skinned knees and one broken arm.  As she went to school, she acquired a best friend, Annie Richardson, and the two were inseparable.  Elaine knew that if the two girls weren’t at her house, they were over at the Richardsons’.  Sarah had her own group of friends, so she and Jean never really spent a great deal of time together.  That was all right with Jean, she had Annie to hang out with.  As they grew older, the two girls got more active, playing out in the yard or whatnot.  On one particularly fine day, Elaine Grey heard a scream from the yard, near the street.  Rushing out to the sound of her daughter’s voice, she found Jean cradling Annie, and a terrified and pale driver bolting out of his car, repeating over and over that he didn’t see the girls in a stricken voice.

Annie died shortly upon arriving at the hospital.  Jean cried bitterly, demanding that her friend wake up, claiming that she’d heard Annie’s voice even after Annie had died.  Elaine and the newly-arrived John chalked it up to a child’s fantasy.  However, Jean started saying some truly wild things, like claiming to hear voices that no one else heard, seeing pretty lights that no one else could, and moving things without touching them.  The Greys were upset at the change in their pretty daughter, and they sought out the best child psychologists for advice, while Jean struggled with her own identity and these invasive voices in her head.

The psychologists prescribed various meds to control Jean’s behavior, but the girl grew more and more frightened by what was happening to her.  She didn’t understand why no one would believe she could hear voices, she didn’t understand why she could move things just by looking at them, she simply didn’t understand why her best friend died and she didn’t.  She saw the spectre of Death over her constantly, a presence waiting to prey upon her very soul.  In the end, all of the counseling and all of the drugs couldn’t put Humpty Jeanie back together again.

She was eventually remanded into the custody of a mental institution. In the institution, Jean was given drugs that sapped her very will. These drugs kept her barely lucid, and it tore her parents’ hearts to see her there, yet they didn’t know what else to do for their daughter. Sarah rarely came to visit during this time, and she never brought her kids with her.  Over the course of a few years, Jean was given a regular high school education, when she was properly conscious and lucid enough to remember.  As she neared her 17th birthday, she was released from the institution, proclaimed mentally stable and ready to be rehabilitated into society.

Little did they know.

Only through constant use of prescription drugs aimed at dampening the imaginative parts of her mind down, Jean is able to make it through every day, one by one.  Like a recovering alcoholic, she counts each day as a blessing, and she has to consciously work to make it through any given day.  Eschewing a more social life, Jean found her balance in a library, living her life vicariously through books and through scholastic work.

She eventually went to college at the age of 18, got her BA at the age of 21, went back to school for her masters, which she achieved at the age of 23.  She decided to follow her father’s path in life, going back for her doctorate, whose thesis she successfully defended in 1998, at the age of 26.  At the age of 27, she was hired by Bard College as a mere associate professor of Sociology.

In the past year, she has made some inroads into this whole alleged mutant situation and has started setting herself up as one of the premiere proponents of the idea that mutants do not exist.  Repeat, do not exist.  Despite the so-called Black Prom, Jean is still of the belief that it wasn’t mutants, that someone was merely using that hysteria as a mask for their sinister deeds.  She was invited to Columbia University by Professor Charles F. Xavier to speak at the Symposium.  Having prepared her speech, she went and gave a properly sedate commentary on exactly why mutants didn’t exist.  The Symposium was crashed by an entity who called himself Magneto, and Jean Grey was willing to fight for her beliefs, trying to prove in the face of his seeming abilities that it was all stage trickery, smoke and mirrors, doing her best to debunk the mutant theory head-on.  Magneto let her live, despite her best efforts to piss him off, and Jean Grey has returned to Bard College, an instant unwilling media sensation.

15.     Potential

Psionic - The drugs and constant denial have wrought havoc on Jean Grey’s mutant talents, yet she does have them, whether she wants them or not. Jean has a potential, with time, training, and the overcoming of her fears, to be one of the world’s premiere psionic talents, just shy of Xavier in raw power, yet with the ability to surpass him simply because she is fully psionic, while he is only a telepath.  The biggest barrier to Jean gaining control of her abilities is the fact that she simply doesn’t believe in them.  While the drugs are a factor and would need time to get her through withdrawl from them, psionic abilities are a function of belief and will.  Jean’s got the will, just not the belief. Telepathy - Jean’s telepathic potential is unsurpassed.  She could conceivably transmit telepathically to the functional range of telepathy. Here is the main skills she would be capable of if she ever gained her powers, and their limits and such.

Communication - Jean is able to speak without using her voice to one unshielded mind in her vicinity, within 9 miles.  This speech would be like calling someone on the phone.  Naturally, the distance decreases with unfamiliarity with the mind being spoken to, any crowds in the area, or if the mind is shielded.  She can also receive telepathic communications, but since she herself doesn’t know any telepaths, it would come as some surprise.

Auras - Most telepaths can see ‘the lights’, the beauty that is psionic auras.  Everyone has an aura unless they’re dead, even if they’re not a telepath.  Like most telepaths, Jean can see these things.  The busier the mind, the more frenetic the aura.  Sometimes, she has to force herself /not/ to see these things, because reacting to them will get her looked at funny by someone who doesn’t understand her or see why she’s reacting the way she is.  Also, this is why most telepaths could see if they were blind, such as Psylocke in the canon.  Jean would be able to, blinded or with her eyes closed, see using the telepathic lights to guide her.  Think of it like a telepathic night-vision goggles.  Clarity isn’t as good, but she could get around without running into anything or anyone.

Empathy - Empathy is a lesser aspect of telepathy.  While it could be developed into something sinister, such as screwing with someone’s emotions (like Empath in the canon), for Jean it is merely her being able to sense the emotions of those around her.  Also like her telepathy, it is something she sometimes has to screen out.  Large crowds or strong emotions have a bad habit of getting past the barriers in her mind against such things, and they become harder to screen out. Shields - When one has half the world screaming in one’s head, one creates barriers, or shields, to protect one’s mind.  Jean Grey has generated, out of sheer necessity, psi-shields around her mind.  They of course are untrained, so a skilled telepath such as Emma or Xavier could break in with no difficulty, but most of the psionic noise around her generated by unguarded thoughts or emotions is screened out.

Mindlink - A telepathic conference call is something that Jean is just barely able to accomplish.  It fatigues her greatly and generally gives her a pounding headache.  At this point, Jean can only mindlink herself with two minds that are unshielded and familiar to her, within a radius of 1 mile.

Astral Projection - Literally, this ability is an out of body experience. Jean is capable, with proper meditation of at least an hour, to project her consciousness out of her body, for periods of up to an hour, ranging up to a distance of 1 mile.  As an astral image, she appears as a ghost to those who see her.  Naturally, psions would be able to see her better. While Jean is out of her body, she retains no awareness of it, and she is completely invulnerable to attack upon her body and upon her astral self. Potential - Jean has vast potential to improve her telepathic ability. She has enough raw power to rank in the second level behind such folks as Xavier, the Shadow King, Emma Frost.  It is merely circumstances which have prevented her from attaining that sort of skillset.  It will be RPed over the course of time her gaining the full powerset.

Telekinesis - Telekinesis is the ability to affect the physical world through the power of the mind.  It is generally used as a physical force, such as bending spoons, rather than an energy force, such as energy blasts.  Jean Grey has vast telekinetic potential, ranked in the first level.  Jean was never trained to use this ability, and she is afraid of using it in manners that would injure or kill another; thus, she is only a mere shadow of her canonical self with this ability.  She is capable of only three major stunts with her telekinetic abilities.

Push/Pull - The easiest telekinetic trick Jean is capable of performing is moving objects around.  This would include things like pulling a book to her, pushing a box into a corner, and other such mundane things.  She is capable of exerting a force of 1 ton, but since such a force against a human being would be lethal, she generally uses just enough to get the job done, generally in the 100 or 200 pound level.  The higher a strength she uses, the more quickly she tires out.

Levitation - By exerting her telekinetic force downward and acting upon herself, she is able to levitate herself off the ground up to a height of three stories.  This is a higher-end usage of her nebulous powers at this time, so it strains her immensely.  She can only hold herself aloft for an hour before tiring out and falling.  If she tries to levitate others with her, she can only levitate up to another 500 pounds, and that decreases her hang time to fifteen minutes.  If she exceeds these limits, she will pass out.  She, and anything she is levitating, will fall down go splat.  If she nears these limits, she gets a nice pounding headache for her troubles.

Shield - The final major trick Jean can perform with her telekinesis is the generation of a shield.  This shield can act like an umbrella in the rain, it can protect her from incoming bullets, and it can dispell some energy-based attacks.  Right now, it is more of an instinctive thing than something she has concentrated upon.  Also, it is a piecemeal sort of thing.  She cannot generate big whomping hemispheres to protect her and a billion people.  Her shields are half-shields, only capable of protecting half of her and anyone behind the shield.  The shield can only reach a size of a wide doorway.  Of course, if she made smaller shields, she could keep it up longer before tiring.  At this point, any shield can only take about 2 tons of damage.  The maximum amount of time her large shield can hold out is a half-hour, assuming only a moderate barrage.  A heavy barrage reduces that time to 15 minutes.

16.     Plans

My plans for Jean are fairly simple.  Jean isn’t anywhere near ready to join a team.  Hell, she is more likely to have a mental breakdown if it is revealed to her that she is a mutant with vast potential. That whole denouement is my first goal, something that will be teased over the course of time, until, and if, she is able to take the fact that she’s something she firmly believes doesn’t exist. Should be fun.


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